For a first GFX that looks good! I like how you made the glowing eyes of the ‘monster’ or whatever the creator is. Nice work for a first GFX!
Hey! I think you’re off to a great start! I love the scene and lighting. I would have loved to see this from a slightly different angle, maybe one that shows a little more of the main character.
But over all, I think you did great! Keep it up! 
The render looks very good like the composition and posing structure the scene doesn’t look overdone and the use of lighting is on point. I would remove rating from the title since your looking for (criticism and constructive feedback and not a x/10).
The render shows a small amount of details, you may want to experiment into adding or placing particles that would intense the scene a bit more, what I mean is night areas there’s a few animals or bugs outside mainly in a forest area you may want to include fireflies flying around the bushes and shrubs even with the realistic approach your going for.
If you place a few objects around the surrounding area it’ll give the render a appealing look or more of a better render maybe throw another character with his partner helping him fight the zombie creatures off one user can’t be left alone with no cover and backup. Otherwise, it’s a good render nice approach.
Looks great!!! I genuinely know for a fact it’s 10x better than my first one, it looks great i love the aesthetic.
Scorned2000:
Looks AMAZING and you have some real talent in you. The glowing eyes are my fav part 
Thanks for the feedback! I will see what I can do next time. I was actually thinking about including particles from the start but my PC has had enough, haha. It was at 4 million tris. The light blocks out the trees in the back so i will just end up deleting the trees to bring the thing down to about 200k tris which would help the scene run faster on my PC and next time i’ll definitely add air particles and more ground detail like rocks, and debree, thanks for the feedback!
Damn for a first GFX to be this good is just fantastic to me! To the thing which I would add in the AWESOME renders are maybe a little bit more of glow type eye to the zombies. Makes it much more scary in my eye lol.
Great job otherwise! Love it! 
Hey, this is actually really nice looking! The environment is great and the general… uhh, event? scene? that thing. its good.
My feedback would be that the creatures eyes should be glowing in a way that actually affects the environment around it, or it should have emissions, to show its actually glowing. A good way to do this is maybe just enable bloom (if this is rendered in blender eevee) OR put a light in front of the monsters eyes.
Another thing about the render that’s kinda off is the grass. Grass naturally tapers off at the end, and the grass in this render is kinda just… a square.
Heres an image for uh… idk, images are useful.
Thanks for the feedback! The zombies eyes to emit like that, but for some reason, when i distant the camera, the emission goes away which ruined the feeling of their glowing eyes. I guess i’d have to do that part in photoshop since blender wasnt catching the emission when i placed the cameras further away. I will make sure the grass isn’t like that next time, thanks!
Really good first GFX! It’s hard to see what’s there because it’s so dark but that’s it’s.
I know that people are already saying this is pretty dark but maybe a vignette could be added to darken the edges, add depth and increase contrast between the light and darker parts
Too good to be your first GFX, it looks very professional off the start. The lighting area and the scene reminded me something of Left For Dead Franchise or the Walking Dead one. I am actually impressed and speechless at the same time! 
I love it, there are a few things you could change about it, like the fact that it is very dark (I know its supposed to be set in the night but people still want to see it )