My first GFX, please give me some feedback and how I can improve it would mean alot, thanks.
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Looks really nice for your first time! 
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I appreciate it. Thanks for the feedback!
The rig you used looks nice, but the post looks very stiff, you dont usually sit like that on a seat but for your first time? Amazing work!
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You could improve the player sitting position and improve the light so doesn’t look very plastic. But apart from that is very good!
(Remember to add a watermark so people can’t stole it, with a logo/name in the corner is good enough.)
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I will fix it thank you for the feedback.
Thank you for that I will make sure to do it.
This looks like you did it in studio, not blender. Also, the lighting is really bad, try to use an HDRI. Also, your character’s legs are clipping the seat. Otherwise, it is okay.
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Was made in Blender lol, but yea the pose and lighting is bad I will fix it.
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Your first GFX?! I can’t believe it!
This is very impressive, especially for your first GFX.
Here’s some feedback:
Lighting
Some of the lighting looks off. Its quite dim in some places (the monitors).
Also, the character should have some light on the back of his chair and body as there is a light directly behind him which should emit light.
It all seems quite bland, it needs some brightening up and natural light.
Odd Collisions
The character seems to be sitting at a weird angle on the chair, its quite unnatural.
Also, the right monitor is no-clipping the right speaker.
Logic
Where is the character looking? Is he meant to be looking at the camera? It just seems a bit odd about where he is facing.
Desk Contents
It looks to me that the right speaker is floating, and i’m also assuming the left one is as well. The desk itself could do with a bit of finalising, take the right corner for example, the red line does not correspond with the centre piece red line.
Depth
Everything seems flat. Make some depth. It could be the bland light that is causing the odd illusion.
GFX?
I see no image editing. Seems just like a render to me.
But you’re going somewhere if this your first GFX.
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Thank you for this constructive and straight forward feedback, using this I’m sure I can make my future GFX better. I appreciate the detail and time you put into it I hope you have a good day.
I think it looks good! The angle and everything else is nice