Feedback on my First GFX

Not much to say here, Do any of you guys have some feedback, or ideas on what I should add? Try to make it halloween Related. I’ll Probably look into fiding a better stone texture.

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It looks pretty nice and cool! keep it up!!

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You must fix lighting place and character shadow

Decent attempt, I would approach into adding shadows on the surface part the character shadows look a little dim and not showing since the glare in the sky should increase the shadow appearance. I see the look you’re trying to achieve, consider adding like different formations of pumpkin carvings instead of repetitive objects.

I would recommend adding lighting not only from the moon glare, however, but possibly have some hitting other areas the shadows look too heavy in the corners. The glare could be fixed as it doesn’t look realistic since it looks rather heavy and bright in my personal opinion.

Consider playing around with the lighting to capture a nice look it almost looks like a “Point-light” was above the character creating that circle formation. Otherwise, a good start, but there is still space for improvements

I really like the gfx from the first look, but after more looking, I saw this:
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the moonlight appears from this flat area. I assume you did it in a photo editing software. What I recommend is drawing some translucent shapes that will connect the moonlight to the moon. Great job with the first one!

Pretty sick!

The lighting it’s kinda wrong but, for the first time is good.