This is my first low poly building ever.
I’d like if you could tell me how can I make it better
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The grass is too yellow. While I’m assuming the grass is intended to be yellow looking, grass in real life often isn’t almost the shade of mustard. If that was made greener I think it’d look a lot better.
Another idea is adding some blades of grass.
Thank you for feedback!
I’ll work on that.
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Maybe fix that grass to begin. Then you could make it better by adding stuff rn it’s too simple.
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Thanks for feedback!
I’ll work on my builds in future.
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Hello there @MythicShadowWasTaken.
First of all, i’m really impressed by your work as this is your first low poly build EVER, even though it looks pretty nice, there is always for sure room for improvement. I have a couple of suggestions that might help you improve this model.
Before anything else, i would say that the main rock doesn’t really look realistic as there are too many cuts everywhere, also the trees have a flat top which isn’t really visually appealing so you might wanna change that.
The rocks seems to be really well made. Maybe if you want any additions to improve the overall look of the build, i would suggest you to add grass, flowers or mushrooms to make it look more natural.
Other than that, you’ve really done a great job on this.
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Thank you for feedback I don’t think I’ll work on this model as it was just an example of what I can do.
But now that I have your feedback I think I can improve my skills. Thanks!
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its very cool but maybe make the grass less yelow.
Thank you for feedback! I won’t actually update this model but because I was just using this as an example of what I can do but I’m happy that a lot people commented so that I can know how to do stuff in future.
Ok that’s cool, you’re pretty good at building.