Hi! I just built my first Low Poly / Cartoon(ish) build and I’d like your honest feedback so I can improve on this style of build.
Reference:
My build
The umbrella is a little janky and I was wondering how I could make it more streamlined and look better
I look forward to your feedback (again).
you’d could make the quality on the First Picture. also making the sign like the original.
I didn’t want to make an interior that’s why the windows are just black. Not sure if that’s what you meant by. Or if you just meant that the image quality was poor.
Blockquote “you’d could make the quality on the First Picture”
And for the sign, my friend wanted to add something else to it. That’s why it’s different from the original
This is my attempt at replicating the sign from the reference.
Hello, you can use the lighting property (ColorCorrection) to change the colors a little and make the look better and also add more details!!
Concidering its your first low poly build, it seems you have talent at building. Keep it up!
Edit: I figured out how to make the umbrella look a little better, it still is a little jacked up but looks better and a lot more rounded.
As always, use blender for complex shapes. (or any other external modelling software)
This is nitpicking, but I enjoy detail so… make the table square like the original so that the benches look nice up against it.
This is minus-poly.
Great job, but you need to make it exactly like inside the references. Over here we’re not talking about your opinion on art but how to improve fast and efficiently.
Noted, I did the original build for practice at school in about 20 minutes.
Later on, I made this which I think is a great improvement in accuracy (give or take the orientation of a brick or two) and quality.
Using this reference
Edit: I just realized after posting this that the scaling of the coffee cup icon is off compared to the reference so I fixed it & it looks like the reference.
Hello,
I’ve seen that the Quality is poor. could you resend it with an better Quality?
