Feedback on my first low poly builds using blender!

Hello Roblox Developers! I’ve have just created a low poly tree, and different types of low poly rocks. Keep in mind, this is my first time using blender. I normally build realistically, but I decided to try out low poly. I personally think I did good, and hope I can get some feedback on this. I have taken two screenshots with different lightning. Here are the examples of my work.

First Example:

Second Example:

(I will take criticism). Criticism helps me advance my building skills. Hope you enjoy my creation!

I really like them! I like the cartoonish style you used. Maybe add some more branches to make it look more realistic!

It’s very nice but the leaves are a little too up. Maybe change the leaves style?

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I could possibly scale them and maybe place them differently.

Branches would be nice! I might consider that.

Yeah, possibly.

Ideas

  • More branches.
  • Longer and bigger branches.

And that’s all! Hope you success to make these meshes.

The trunk seems super tall and bare, with the leaves set so far up the trunk. Pine trees like that usually start their leaves very close to the ground, maybe a stud or two depending on the size of the tree.

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Trees are pretty good but if you are making them for a game, I suggest making different variations with number of branches, size, etc.

It’s a good build from someone learning a 3D application your cartoony has a decent shape so far, but to make it seem more unique like try making your tree come in a different shape and size try not making it look repetitive. You should throw some smaller and larger branches around the tree trunk.

Try creating other shapes of rocks which has different sizes and shape to it or create some that have larger looks placed on it because while the rocks and tree formation have nice design and use of material add more that come in different shapes if you know what i mean. So your attempt at creating one was successful, since this is your first attempt in a 3D modeling software.

I encourage you to look at a few images so you could create other designs within the models have you consider adding some ‘tree roots’ that anchor the tree in the ground to have a more realistic approach.

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