I made my first low poly shop (modern), so I would like to take some feedback to improuve it because I m more medieval style and I want learn more modern style. So there are screenshot from different view of my build.
Front :
The roof looks a bit plain, maybe add some air vents? -Also The back is a bit empty? maybe add a back door to it. The cylinders on the roof just dont make sense, add more detail to it.
The door.
Other than that, nice build man!
It doesn’t quite capture that modern look perhaps playing around with the lighting and other effects could accomplish that theme your currently wanting to achieve.
I would recommend using more vibrant colors since you’re more focused on achieving modern looks I think it looks good you accomplished the layout of the place and the shape looks pleasing to the eye.
Right now it seems the building is made very well and as for the objects I would definitely change the door to something else having the door having a full glass material looks a bit unappealing to look at. I’m not sure if this was intentional or not, but I see shop roofs feature more details perhaps you could decor that a bit more however I feel like the roof isn’t a big problem.
As regarding the back, I think that could be improved more at the start your on your way it just needs some improvements here and there to accomplish that look you’re wanting to get.
Pretty good for a first time.
Just a few things I’d change would be:
Try and spend a bit more time on this, you’ll see great improvement.
Good job. Keep building!
I took some feedback you sent (thanks for all feedback that help me alot for improuvement) and I updated some of things like door, roof, … here some screenshots.
At the start loving the improvements:
By looking at the images I recommend adding decreasing the amount of vents, there’s usually two or one, I would try changing the color of them try going for a white color however it’s up to you to see which color matches your point of view.
The colors still look a bit dull cartoony builds strive for more vibrant colors yours looks alright, but messing around with the colors or lighting could improve that I would try testing it and see which design suits your liking, with more and more vents placed on top I feel like they should be (removed) not completely but try placing only just two or one shops don’t have a lot of them on top of the roof from my understanding.
Right now, I feel like there’s no reason, having the box vents since there’s already a flat one placed on top overall great progress: slightly_smiling_face:
