Back in high school, I started to do some roblox development for fun and this piece of playing thing was the first proper decent thing I made, with more than “very simple” scripts. I also tried to make it a little bit educational where kids can learn something about it with these “multiple choice learning boards”.
Lately I decided that maybe I should get back at roblox after a big break since I started university so I wondered if I could get some feedback on the latest one I released.
So far I think the sound design should be tweaked a little, it is quite deafening right now and I noticed that a year ago or so roblox removed the music option so I need to check into that too. Maybe the UI a little bit too.
I am mainly a programmer, with no knowledge of any art like UI or music so bear that in mind. The map was built by myself but most of the assets (<90%) are free models from the catalog. I didn’t see it feasible to build every single object in the game.
The game made a few hundred robux under 5k. Kinda decent, but quite not representative to the amounts of hours put into the game. So maybe tactics to improve sales and premium retention rates are appreciated.
Yup, just thinking what more experienced folks think should be improved on this.
I think your game is quite original. It is also a quite unique way to make an educational game aswell.
The issue here is that the dame is quite looking like a “clicker game” which you need to click on the book to get more money and then evolved into the game. Maybe replace the weapons in the game aswell to create more power ups and automatic money maker to make the game feel more like a tycoon. Therefore, there is some educational boards you can unlock in the game to continue and advance in the game.
I didn’t play it for a while because I am busy with college, but it was quite fun to play.
Maybe try to invest to hire a builder, 3d molder and an ui designer to polish your game in the esthetic way.
As an Graphic & UI designer, I usually work in project in team (with a programmer and a builder) to create games.
I hope this review will help you to polish your game.
Have a great day!
A very big flaw in your game is the complete lack of background music. The Billboard UIs could also meet some improvements. It also took me 2 minutes to figure out where my tycoon is. You should add an indicator that tells where the closest tycoon is, preferrably by using a Beam or a Highlight.
Yeah, the background music was removed with the change to the sound system by roblox as mentioned in the post.
Hmm, weren’t you spawned in front of a free tycoon?
