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#1

This is my first Roblox render! Your feedback is greatly appreciated as it will help me improve. :blush:

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#2

The posing is good and you used enough samples and resolution.

However itā€™s very boring. The lighting is colourless and almost completely flat. There is no background and the camera doesnā€™t show enough of the character

For your first GFX itā€™s not bad at all and I hope your next is much improved!

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#3

Thereā€™s not supposed to be a backgroundā€¦?

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#4

That looks sick! The lighting is amazing. By the way, did you use Blender to make it?

#5

Well done, very surprised that this is your first render!

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#6

GFX should have backrounds though. Or else it looks extremely boring and not good at all. Unless this was for something else like a character to copy and paste on to a picture???

#7

I think he was just testing poses and looks on how to use GFX. This is after all his first render.

Otherwise, for a first render, this is really good!

#8

Nice, but the lighting I think could use some work. It just looks very flat right now.

#9

Yep, I did. Thank you for your feedback.

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#10

Thereā€™s a difference between a GFX and a renderā€¦

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#11

Well tbh there used interchangeably these days so itā€™s hard to tell lol.

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#12

I am getting into GFX art style too! I like it but I would like it more if the whole character was showing but for your first one its pretty good!

#13

The posing is a little flat and, with all due respect, ā€œlifelessā€ in my opinion. The lighting color is a little plain with it just being white but itā€™s fine, gives it a modern look. Iā€™m very very glad to see that youā€™ve used a rig for your first render.

Donā€™t let this criticism weigh you down, let it be helpful advice :slight_smile:

Keep up the good work

#14

Plain renders can be extremely helpful when it comes to YouTube or a very good way of starting out graphic design. These renders can be put in different pictures very easily with a little lighting and photo manipulation skill. While YouTubers can use renders with a transparent background in a more quicker fashion for multiple thumbnails, instead of having to repeat the process of making renders over and over again.

#15

Yes I know how helpful they can be! I was just confused weather this was supposed to be a GFX or a render as people use the words like they mean the same thing.

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