Feedback on my first render

This is my first ever render! I modeled it in Blender, using a low-poly style. I followed Grant Abbitt’s tutorials on youtube. All feedback is appreciated!

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Looks cool :slight_smile:

The only thing I see wrong is the man that is standing there, his legs are not connected to his torso.

Other then that, Good job :slight_smile:

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Oh yeah. Thanks for pointing that out.

lighting isn’t great needs to be illuminated more, posing needs to be less rigid, set design needs to be more expansive

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This is my first ever render, I’m just learning the tools and all that. This was more of an exercise to practice my skills.

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i don’t know what to say about that. should i change my reply? you said all feedback is appreciated

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very grainy and noisy around the lights

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The person in front of the monster has a very odd-looking shape. His head is connected to the torso.
His hands are cubes, and they aren’t connected to his arms.

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room is kinda empty. might be good to add background props

It’s not a room, it’s a street, thanks anyway.

oh didn’t notice, but still empty lol

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This is a great first render, I actually really like the noise around the light because it feels like thats how it’s supposed to be. I wish you well in your journey!