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#1

Hey, looking for things I could improve about this render?

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#2

It’s Amazing For Your First Render

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#3

The lighting could be improved; the edges of the character are very rigid, and seem to look unrealistic when matched with this lighting.

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#4

Thanks! Which settings could I modify for next time?
Could I enable bloom, or just lower contrast a bit?

#5

What application did you make this render in?

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#6

Blender version 2.80, downloaded it a few hours ago.

#7

Looks good for a 1st render! I’d recommend to switch to the latest blender version though.

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#8

Try to add a lightroom, which can help enhance the ambience of your render. HDRIs • Poly Haven

Here’s a tutorial: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6VBkj_I-ONk

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#9

For a first render, this is actually pretty impressive. I wouldn’t call myself a professional but here are some of the tricks I use when I render.

  1. Try using rigs to make the character smoother, the only problem is that it will affect the way your it looks. For example, if you have a very tall avatar, the rig will make its height to the original Roblox avatar height.
    Here’s an example of a rig:
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  2. Other than that, I’d say you can remove the blender background (making it transparent) by going to Film and enabling this box.
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  3. I will agree with what TotallyBusiness said. Try switching to the latest version of Blender, as it can come with a lot more features and can even speed up your rendering process.

  4. Lastly, try switching to the Rendering Engine called Cycles
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    If you’ve tried that and it seems to have “noise” (basically a lot of pixels), you can enable the default Blender denoiser.
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    It might take a bit more time, but trust me, it’s worth it.

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#10

Looks really good! Specially for your first render!