Feedback on My First Shirt Design!

Hey Developers, :wave: @LandnBlu here!

I want to show you a new clothing design I made. I know it lacks something, which might be an icon on the front back or sleeves, maybe text somewhere. Here it is:

I would love to hear your feedback on this! Criticism is allowed as long as it is constructive and not too harsh. Please keep in mind when giving feedback that this is my first design.

Thanks!
Land

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YOUR FIRST???

The shading is hot periodt

  • Make the Sleeves longer?

  • Maybe make the neck hole a V shape but if you want to keep it a O shape, make it so it has a outline and noticeably thick but not tooo thick
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    Maybe not as thick as big as this but yea, outline the neck hole?

  • Try to make it decorative at the center;
    Like a small pocket on the top right or left
    and/or white stripes that line up with the sleeves

also maybe outline the ends of the sleeves
image

not sweater thick like this^
but a little outline

OR you can practice accessory skills, maybe attempt to make a back pack

Also if you want to make sure shading lines up or any future details line up on the template once publishing, maybe use the advanced template

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Looks good, my only suggestion is to make the shading more transparent and to slightly blur it.

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Yes!

Tysm lol

I will take all your feedback into consideration. Thanks for replying!

Thanks for the feedback! Much apreciated.