So This Is my first time making a sky scrapper ad. What do you think? and will it preform well.
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Feedback Welcome.
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Looks amazing but the ad is a bit plain, maybe adding a different text font or an eye-catching background. Overall, amazing work
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Thank you for The Feedback. It helps.
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Would you say the new one is better?
Very nice , now add another font , like this one : https://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.dafont.com%2Fimg%2Fillustration%2Fd%2Fi%2Fdimbo.png&imgrefurl=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.dafont.com%2Fdimbo.font&tbnid=2Gw0kexq47_iKM&vet=12ahUKEwi9_b2XntbvAhVDYBoKHfJyDkcQMygCegUIARClAQ..i&docid=mQdsF4zjOl5CrM&w=640&h=300&q=dimbo&safe=strict&ved=2ahUKEwi9_b2XntbvAhVDYBoKHfJyDkcQMygCegUIARClAQ
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I’m…not a huge fan. The text doesn’t contrast very well with the background and the drop shadow makes it look kind of blurry to me. The character looks cool but the lighting is very bland, and overall the ad just doesn’t intrigue me. I get the idea you’re going for, but most players (myself included) want to see some aspect of the game, rather than just a mysterious ad.
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What reasons behind it being the most common type in that case. And even with my own experience. More vague ads preformed better.
Agree to the fullest, it looks absolutely amazing for a starters and of course as you learn/do more of these type of advertisements you’ll improve. However, some tips I had in mind already have been listed. I mainly think more details should be added as it looks a little plain, although great job for your first time!
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Thank you. I will be improving this as specifically. Thank you for the feedback.
What Would You Say About The New Version?
In my opinion, no.
For it to perform well, a main factor is making it eye-catching, this advertisement is not really eye-catching, and it doesn’t really catch my eye.
You should also try to get the main point across, like what are you advertising? For example, if the ad is for an obby game, you could make it say, “the best obby on Roblox!” or “the most challenging obby on Roblox!”
With the ad you’re using, it doesn’t really get the point across. What’s the topic of what you’re advertising?
So in my opinion, I don’t think this ad would do well.
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I think it looks nice but it’s too simple. You’re giving players no reason to click on your ad. Show & Tell the reason through your ad, and it will be better.
Overall, good work bro.
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Thank you, I Based This off the Fact that, My best preforming Banner Ad. Was plain text. “This Is The Best Simulator Ever” Which Surprised me.
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Thank you for the Feedback. 
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Do you think The Newest one would Catch Your eye?
Not really, none of the designs catch my eye, to be honest.
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Well thank you for the feedback, and Honesty.