Feedback on my first song

Hey, DevForum!

I recently had to make a song using flat for my band class, the finished piece is ok at best, but am pretty proud of it.


Is the final result, if your curious, the project was where we had a random band piece name and had to make music around it, I got Symphonic Creek Portrait.

There is nothing real special about the song, I just did it for a project and am wondering things I could change!

Feel free to go as harsh as you want, it’s my first time composing and it’s bad.

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Sounds good! I don’t know the first thing about music so I can’t really judge.

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Personally, I’m a house producer, but I don’t find anything wrong with this song, and I’m not just being nice.

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Kind of sounds like a Doki Doki Literature Club song. I like it.

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@PorgDotOrg @whitezane444 @wholbr
Thanks! I didn’t really intend it to be like DDLC, but it does kind of sound like it :thinking:

I’m no music producer, but I think this sounds really nice!
I did notice though that at 19:00 seconds, the music stopped for a second. Is that correct? It sounds wrong to keep that in there. That’s my opinion though.

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Hey! That was meant as a “breath mark” little area, I just added it in cause I felt like it.

Oh sorry, I was just seeing if it was intentional or not…