Made this song in about a day or two and I was wondering if I could get some feedback!
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The genre is more of a trap style…
Nice ideas, but here’s some things you could work on:
Mixing: A lot of the song is muddy, there are a lot of low frequencies. For example, the 808 and the kick are hard to tell apart especially when they are playing at the same time. Try boosting the high frequencies of the kick, or maybe try sidechaining the 808’s volume to the kick.
The snare is also a bit low, raising the highs on the snare a little should be fine.
Starting at 0:48, the 808 is overlapping itself when a new note is played, making the song even muddier. Especially starting at 1:04. The 808 should be cutting itself whenever a new note is played.
Generally, the mix sounds very dull, but with a little bit of revision it should sound even better.
Arrangement: The chords playing through the whole song could get old after a while but you did a pretty good job from keeping it interesting. Even more so during the later part of the song. I like the guitar(?) at 0:48. And the last section of the song is very different which is a breath of fresh air.
Overall decent job. Keep it up!
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Damn, this is really good!! 
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