Feedback on my first song

Hi, I would like some feedback on my first song as a composer, it’s not much but it’s my first song so I would like some feedback on it.

here it is:

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It’s more of a little loop but I like the chiptune sound it has. If you were to expand upon this it’d probably be good enough to put in a game really ^^

Thanks for your feedback! I will try to add more to it.

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I would say it is quite a nice tune. What type of genre will you make it into?

I’m planning on making the genre to New Age, maybe.

Sounds rough.
It seems like an okay start but it seems like you have some of the notes way too quick in succession.

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