Feedback on my first song

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#1

Hi, I would like some feedback on my first song as a composer, it’s not much but it’s my first song so I would like some feedback on it.

here it is:

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#2

It’s more of a little loop but I like the chiptune sound it has. If you were to expand upon this it’d probably be good enough to put in a game really ^^

#3

Thanks for your feedback! I will try to add more to it.

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#4

I would say it is quite a nice tune. What type of genre will you make it into?

#5

I’m planning on making the genre to New Age, maybe.

#6

Sounds rough.
It seems like an okay start but it seems like you have some of the notes way too quick in succession.

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