Hello Roblox Developers, I currently have achieved the milestone of creating my first ever vehicle on roblox! I tried pushing it to the limit of my skills currently and made it as realistic as i could make it look!
I would love to hear your feedback! 
PS: This is supposed to resemble a coach bus.
Hey Dude!
Wow! I love it. It looks very nice and well detailed. One thing I highly suggest is taking those corners and rounding them a little a bit smoother with blender. It looks very awesome just a bit too blocky. Great Job! Looks Amazing. 
Thank you!
I’m currently trying to learn blender but its hard.
But your right, if I had some knowledge on blender this would be a much better build.
Thanks for the feedback though!
It’s pretty good for a first vehicle but there are still some downsides, add some details near the edges of the sides since it kinda looks bland on them, the front glass seems way too big maybe make it smaller and better if you can, other than that though it’s pretty good so far keep up the good work! 
Yes, No Problem. Blender can be difficult but always try and take time too learn it and watch tutorials on how too do certain things.
Thank you!
I will Try the tips you have suggested.
Thanks for the feedback!
Hi there!
This is something I actually specialize in! For a first attempt it looks incredibly good.
Next time, you should use cylinders for corners like in figure A I posted. Next, you shouldn’t have made the slant I highlighted in figure B as exaggerated as you wouldn’t see that on a real bus. Third, the rear wheels should be brought towards the front slightly more (as shown in figure C) or add a second axle. Fourth, add a black outline for the door. Another thing that could be done is maybe adding a vent to the rear because it looks really empty. You could also potentially add destinations signs and make the windows glass materials.
I apologize for being harsh with my critique but I’d like to see you improve
Keep building!
Wow! Thank you!
I see what you mean. The Bus isn’t as realistic as possible as it could be.
Thanks for the feedback, I’ll take in consideration what you said!
The shape of the bus is great. But there could be a lot done here.
The back of the bus is flat and need a bit of work. Maybe you could add a Window to the back and maybe a logo or a company name. Also , add an exhaust pipe. The angle at the bottom as is way to high and that needs to be lowered more.
The lights at the front look really not realistic on the picture so maybe have curved lights and let it stick out. Also add an bigger vent in the front or the back so it like more realistic.
The mirrors by the window is too small and looks not secure. Probably make that bigger and more down.
There are too many doors on the side for luggage and I think there should only be 2 , one in the back and on in the front and give another door on the other side.
The door to get in doesn’t look like an door and very hard to see. Put a frame around it to see visible where the door is.
The using different colour shades and textures so it not so boring and flat.
The rims on the wheel also need to a bit more worked on by adding like thicker rubber and good rims.
The inside has good shape so I’m looking forward into this.
Overall for a first car , it really good.
Hope this helped , thanks Bart.
Thanks for all the feedback, I will take this in consideration next time I make a coach bus!
