Feedback on my First Weapon (R870 + Animation)

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#1

First of all, Thanks for clicking on this post, it really means a lot to me.

So, I recently made an R870 that was made using just Roblox parts. I worked on it a bit and created a couple of animations and some sound effects for it and would like feedback on the entire thing.

Please Keep in mindThis is my first time creating an animation(Yes I never made one and also this is my first time actually developing a game

Link to my R870 build post: First time making a weapon (R870) feedback

Any Feedback is appreciated!,
OceanTubez

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#2

Looks nice! Here’s the feedback:

  1. The Remington seems to be too big compared to the player.
  2. Add a rotation to the arms, it looks like they are separated :fearful:
  3. Reload Animation?

If these are improved/added, it would look way better than this!

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#3

animation very basic, make it go up and character torso go back a little too. i will not give feedback on model

#4

Thanks for your feedback! Here is the reasoning for the points:

  1. The Remington is supposed to be bigger then the player, because well, that’s how memes work.

  2. I will definitely work on that…

  3. I’m in the works of the reload anim…

#5

wait, was it for meme purposes…?

#6

nice animation.
also the gun is oversized
also your left arm is really wierd

#7

Indeed… I’m not going to leak the game name that I’m developing it for because… You’ll see in around a month ; )

#8

As a guy who personally owns a Remington, it’s correct size. Maybe a tad bit big on the barrel length.

Anyways Guten Argen and Happy Valentine’s Day!

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#9

I don’t wanna be rude but as for me model kinda not good, try to improve the model, so what’s about the animation, the shoot needs vertical recoil too rotating and shaking that would make it much better

#10

Suggestion:
Make the gun and arms tilt upwards a bit when firing for recoil
also uhh why is the left arm disconnected lol?

otherwise it is nice :+1:

#11

This was my first animation, didn’t really know how to add recoil :eyes:

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#12

oh no its not too hard (i think)

you rotate the arm and handle upwards slightly
then rotate back
i mean you can add it if you want, it looks good though lol

#13

Hello!,

Thanks for the instructions, but I have learned to animate way more better now!
I’m currently working on a game that hired me as a scripter and animator!

Thanks,
OceanTubez

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#14

Great to hear man!
Wish you good luck