Hello! I am a new developer and recently created my own story type game! It is inspired by the Timmeh videos the youtuber KreekCraft has been doing on his second channel https://www.youtube.com/c/Kreeky/videos.
I hope you enjoy playing it and any feedback would be very helpful : D
I played the first story with Timmeh and I think that it is a really good start. Firstly, I think adding animations to Timmeh while he’s on his computer and about to whack Kreek. Secondly, the story is pretty short, adding some more obby’s or a different game mode to maybe access another part of the map would be pretty cool. Overall I think its a great start but things could be improved, good job!
Thanks so much! Im not to great at animating but I can check look into it.
1st point, I like the lobby system. Simple and efficient.
2nd point, I do like the camera points, did you use tween service for that?
3rd point, The text is a bit slow, you should make it transition faster, along with the camera points.
4th point, Having teams for the players is a bit impractical, but i see why you did it.
And to add to @ilikeitalot123’s point:
I do agree with this, the character Timmeh is standing still.
But for a start, it’s pretty good!
Thanks! The camera points I used a plugin for so Im not really sure.
I played it.
Feedback:
I’m a fast pace kind of person, so when I saw how slow it was…I left.
The background music was not it for me. I just didn’t know the theme.
I got bored when it was loading into Timmeh’s house.
This is my personal feedback on my experience.
Ah ok. I might try and make the rest of the episodes a bit more faster so there is more gameplay rather then sit and watch. Thanks for your help 
It’s pretty good but can you not make the sewer water instant kill you? It didn’t even look like I touched it and I just died
Yes I will do this. I agree I have sometimes died on this when I think I haven’t touched it.
I have now changed it so if you touch the sewer water you take 20 damage rather then instant kill. Thanks for your feedback!
Hi! I played your game and something I noticed was that the text was going really slow, you should speed it up a bit. The obby is also really easy and you could probably add harder jumps and things like that. I also think that you should hide the HD Admin. When Kreekcraft dies don’t make all his limbs seperate, it doesn’t look like he got hit. You could extend the obby a little too. But good job anyway!
Thanks for your feedback! I think I’m going to speed up the text and I will look into the other things you have said.
