Hello! I am a new developer and recently created my own story type game! It is inspired by the Timmeh videos the youtuber KreekCraft has been doing on his second channel https://www.youtube.com/c/Kreeky/videos.
I hope you enjoy playing it and any feedback would be very helpful : D
I played the first story with Timmeh and I think that it is a really good start. Firstly, I think adding animations to Timmeh while he’s on his computer and about to whack Kreek. Secondly, the story is pretty short, adding some more obby’s or a different game mode to maybe access another part of the map would be pretty cool. Overall I think its a great start but things could be improved, good job!
1st point, I like the lobby system. Simple and efficient.
2nd point, I do like the camera points, did you use tween service for that?
3rd point, The text is a bit slow, you should make it transition faster, along with the camera points.
4th point, Having teams for the players is a bit impractical, but i see why you did it.
I’m a fast pace kind of person, so when I saw how slow it was…I left.
The background music was not it for me. I just didn’t know the theme.
I got bored when it was loading into Timmeh’s house.
Hi! I played your game and something I noticed was that the text was going really slow, you should speed it up a bit. The obby is also really easy and you could probably add harder jumps and things like that. I also think that you should hide the HD Admin. When Kreekcraft dies don’t make all his limbs seperate, it doesn’t look like he got hit. You could extend the obby a little too. But good job anyway!