Feedback on my game design?

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Hello everybody! I’ve been currently trying to improve my scripting by creating games and challenging myself. I’ve decided that an obby would be a nice challenge to try to improve and change upon as there are many different obbies out there already.

The game is called Simple Cubes:
NOTE: This game isn’t finished
https://www.roblox.com/games/3478870369/Simple-Cubes-Testing-Place

In the game, you work with a companion to try to get the 7 cubes, the cubes will give you certain abilities when you retrieve them and can be used in the next stages. The game consists of many different obstacles to avoid and use to your advantage.

This game was meant to be hard and difficult yet giving the player a sense of accomplishment when they beat a part, similar to Getting Over It.

I would like to get honest opinions on the idea, layout, and difficulty on the game as it would help improve my game!

Since it’s also my first time using some different services and functions that I’ve been learning, there may be some performance problems, if you encounter any, please do warn me about it so I could attempt to fix it :wink:.

This game is meant to be fairy difficult. I’ll try to tone down the difficulty when I actually begin designing the game though this is essentially going to be around about how difficult it is.

NOTE: The game includes a save and load position GUI to help you traverse through the stage if needed. Press save to save your current position and press load at any time when you have a position saved to go back to it.

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It is a good start. A few things to improve:

  • A lot of white in the game kinda hurt my eyes.
  • Possible way to mute music like a music button click to mute.
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    If you don’t have a stage have it say 0 instead of blank.

Let me know when you finish the game I would like to play it.

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Got it, right now I’m also currently trying to fix bugs and glitches.
EDIT: I’m planning to change the music and the way its played, its not something that I’m going to worry about right now though.

Also, that stage thing isn’t supposed to happen :woman_shrugging: (Guess its another bug, rip me)

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Fixed the many major bugs that caused problems with replication aka breaking the game, bumping this again.

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Overall pretty great and enjoyable, problem was I accidentally pressed save when I was falling lmao.
Some stuff to improve on:

  • The sound for when the dude is talking is way too obnoxious;
  • Add a mute button, the music is off putting;
  • Some jumps are really tough to reach, like really tough especially after the third teleporter;

Keep it up, hoaaaaaaanyyyyyyy.

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