Feedback on my game trailer

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#1

i just made a trailer for my game its not fully dont but its mostly done
im going to add some music and some stuff like that but here it is

please leave any feedback in the replies on the forum

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#2

It doesn’t have any sound, add some non-copyrighted music of your choice, I think that would help add to the trailer.

Also make the music line up with the trailer, so like every drop, there is a cut.

#3

this looks like a tv trailer

Add some great mustic, and add some feel.

#4

Ok so,

  1. Add some audio

  2. Make the Honvair Haven full screen

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#5

yes i said that im going to add music in the post
ill probally make it myself so its not copyrighted

#6

im adding some more stuff inculding an intro im going to try and make some music then update the video

#7

My worse attempt

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#8

yes very pog

#9

i think it looks great but there are too many screen transmissions. one way it could be better is to remove the dimming screen before the transmission or just remove some of them.

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#10

Is good but it could get more effects maybe and maybe remove the green purple logos and make it just a shiny text in white and black background