Feedback on my game which was made for Roblox Developer Dream Jam

I made this game called Town of Cyclonia with my team (consisting of 3 players), we started developing on 7th March and finished developing it on 12th March, the game is mostly a showcase game and it gives out a late afternoon vibe as it was intended to, I want your feedback on this game.

Game: Town of Cyclonia - Roblox

Here are some things that I have noticed:

I hope this helps.