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#1

Can I have some feedback on this game? Anything I should change?

You buy weapons and fight people!
Thanks!

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#2

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also why is this on another account
some alt or smth

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#3

Ok so, the thumbnail gives simcity vibes and 101% isnt roblox. Thats… misleading.

So, upload on your main.
Dont make misleading thumbnails.
Dont really know what else to say.

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#4

Amateur Here!

I suggest changing the thumbnail which a simple way to do that is to take a picture of how its like in-game, or do a bunch of editing in a photoshop software to make your thumbnail more unique but related to what the game is about.

Also I’m currently playing the game right now, but the game feels empty. There are no sounds playing in the background which makes it feel like there’s nothing going on. You could add some music that gives winter vibes, or just music in general.

The tycoon part is also generic, where you just sit and wait for money to fill your cash output. Maybe add a bit more tasks to do like the obby. The conveyor is also pretty buggy in the tycoon, and the tycoon doesn’t really relate to the winter theme. And it doesn’t feel like there’s much to do in the tycoon.

The obby also has some issues though, since it doesn’t relate to the winter theme. You might have to custom build it.

Also the gears in the tycoon are anchored and wont move and simply drags you to the anchored gear. I am unfamiliar with Humanoid scripts since I am a amateur so I can’t give feedback there.

Now the main points are done. Lets go to the little issues.

  • The server player size is too small. Try to change the server size so more players can fit in one server, but don’t increase the size too much or lag issues might occur.

  • The map feels small, there’s nothing to explore. Simply increase map size.

  • Since this a build made by one singular player, I suggest you should put the map on your main account. Since the revenue will go to your alt and not to your main. (If you have in-game purchases.)

All I have to say, currently trying to learn the basics of game-making so don’t take this to heart!

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