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#1

Hello, hope your having a good day!

Recently I’ve been making an obby, more different and ‘unique’.

But of course with a obby, you gotta have a starting area/point to it!

I wanted to know what you guys think on the starting point, can there be changes with something (lighting, amount of trees, etc…)

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Check out the game if you want to see it more better (yes the game will be in 1st person and a 1 sever too).

Link: Eternity - Roblox

By the way,

If you’re wanting the assets (trees, bushes, rocks etc…) here’s the link to them. Very useful.

My objective is to make this better and fix everything up, let me know what you think! Have a good day :slight_smile:

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#2

Would be better to make it free if you want feedback. Because no one would waste robux on a game they may never play.

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#3

Ah my bad, fixing it right now

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#4

Fixed it, should be able to play now. Thanks!

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#5

I did play it and I didn’t found anything obby related.

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#6

Please reread the whole text if needed so. Its the starting point, ive not added anything obby releated to the starting point due to it being a starter point, not every area will have something “obby releated”. All im saying is if you can give me feedback on the starting point.

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#7

Ohhhh. I am sorry, well for starting point I say remove the baseplate, expand the map, add more rocks trees maybe a cottage? a path way, maybe some wooden lamp posts here are there and just fix the terrain a bit.

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#8

Wonderful will do, of course ill remove the baseplate having it to place parts down. And wonderful idea with the cottage, will try making one soon. Thank you, much appreciated!

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#9

Feedback :
As shown in the game,

  • Graphics : 4/5 It’s great, a slightly cold tint with a warm sky.
    Comments :
    Would be better if there were more particle effects.

  • Map : 3/5 It’s a starting point.
    Comments :
    Hope to see progress.

  • Interface : N/A It’s a starting point.
    Comments :
    Hope to see progress.

  • Gameplay : 3.5/5 The idea is great, hoping to see progress.
    Comments :
    Hope to see progress.

  • Overall Rating : 4/5 A naturalistic specialty, hope to see progress.

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#10

Much appreciated! Will make alot of changes, thank you :slight_smile:

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#11

very cool but i think you should add water

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#12

Will do that! Much appreciated.

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#13

Hi, just private the game if anyone wanted to say anything or join! Thanks for the suggestions.

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