I have been working on this game for a while now and I need some feedback for it. It’s called Jack’s Unlucky Day and it’s inspired by “NPCs Are Becoming Smart” and “get a snack at 4 am”.
Can you guys give some feedback?
Game Link: Jack's Unlucky Day - Roblox
I don’t know whether this person should be here xD but when I go towards it, it explode
Peak gameplay
Lacks Music and Sound in general and building could be improved, especially the trees that are linear to each other
This game is honestly sub-par. As soon as I joined the UI struck me as odd. It doesn’t seem to fit on the screen, almost like you took some Instances, forced them to be UI elements, and then shoved them onto the screen.
I also see a few issues with the game, most notably:
I also did the first ending of the falling down the stairs, super dissapointing ending tbh, I was expecting to do more things that would show he is having an unlucky day. I didn’t get that with the first ending.
I also found some random dude flipping all over the place:
No Idea if this was intentional or not.
UPDATE: Apparently it was intentional, because I just exploded.
Overall, the game wasn’t the worst I have seen. It does make sense with the bad endings, as they all just tie into a nightmare, but overall it was lacking any sort of real story.
