Feedback on my game?

Can I have some feedback on my game? It’s not finished, and I intend to fix some bugs in it.

Game: https://www.roblox.com/share?code=1154084ad09fc2428ae6e02bd6d026bb&type=ExperienceDetails&stamp=1753722964235

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This game is terrible omg :sob: :sob: :sob:
you need to remake this game from scratch or please start with something easier NOBODY is going to play this

For starters, a lot of parts aren’t even anchored. The burning humanoid that is named “Workspace”
or the random rigs just sporadically placed about.

These boats are clearly floating and are basically beached.


The gun has zero animation, no cool down either basically allowing you to kill people instantly. I’m also not even sure if it’s client or server sided either.

I don’t know why a very clearly modern building is here.

No comment.

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@SubNegative @RtxyRBLX Well I want to make a goofy game but also that has ok mechanics and uh I’m not experienced ok, I don’t know what client or server sided mean, and yeah I’m trying to fix the cooldown. Also I’m getting rid of the workspace thing. And I will probably change that building. Yeah I know this game kinda sucks.

Edit: fancy talk for this is my first game I’ve put effort into

This isnt bad for your first game that you’ve rlly tried to make. There are obviously some things to improve on though

  1. A Purpose
    You should add a goal/progression to this game. Right now, there rlly nothing to do. So whether its fighting other players, npcs, completing quests, earning new guns, or upgrading yourself. There should be SOMETHING for players to try and accomplish.

  2. Functionality
    Make sure everything works. The gun doesnt seem to fire (mobile) and theres a lot of invisible walls that prevent me from using stuff. So, basically the only thing i can do right now is run around. It would be much better if you could use the boats or tanks or rlly js anything to add like that. Also, idk why Mr. Workspace is burning to death, poor guy :wilted_flower:

  3. UI and Polishing
    Theres definitely room to polish this game. Maybe add some badges, so players can try to earn them all. You could obviously add shops to buy new stuff or upgrade your current stuff. You could also add teams or different weapons to the game, that way there variety for players. You can even add a building system to allow players to construct bases to stay protected if you plan on making this pvp.

Anyways, good luck with you game going forward :slight_smile:

Btw this is MUCH better than my first game, u dont even want to know :sob:

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I have some badges I’ll put in the game, and I also wanna add some game passes. Also what do you mean by “invisible walls” the barriers to prevent you falling into the void? And maybe when I know how to do it, I’ll add a match system like the one Naval Warfare has. Also the gun can fire on mobile, maybe you had an error?

Edit: There’s already teams in the game

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Yeah there were some barriers that stopped me from getting on the boat tho

Also i didnt see the teams thats my bad

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No problem for not seeing the teams, also I don’t really wanna make it so you can get on the boats

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You said the gun has no animation? You don’t need animation to make a good game, only for the design aspect. That doesn’t really affect the gameplay.

Ok I have added some badges and fixed the guns, but they are still occasionally buggy. But it’s a start! I might add some gamepasses too or a special item from a badge.

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