Feedback On My Game

Hello everyone. Me and a friend have put hours in daily for
our game Obstacle Run. I just want some feedback about the game,
What do you think we should change? What do you like about the game?
What would cause you to play more? What would cause you to play less?

I just want any feedback for this is I guess the first game I’ve every really finished.

  • Most images are placeholders, I will make better images soon.
  • I know there are some issues with the loading Zindex, Fixing that soon.

https://www.roblox.com/games/5238057553/Obstacle-Run-Public-Release?refPageId=8c664275-93d0-48bf-927d-574a10763e73

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Intro

Hi there, so no offense but I feel like your game is far from done. It doesn’t feel high quality for really anything. I assume you used the free Roblox run camera which I have nothing against but there’s quite a bit more to make it more interesting.

Ideas

For the camera I think it’d be nice by adding camera sway and a camera shake (shake depending on the obstacle). Add rag doll when you die maybe. Maybe add levels where you can play them and progress and even go back and play previous ones.

Current Features

With the UI and I think that could be fixed with a gradient and changing your icons and making them look more like a white button for example those in Simulators.

With the game play I think you should go with the thumbnail and make it look more low-poly. Then have a set place like in a certain Red Plumber game where if you hit the end he lowers the flag and raises his flag to mark victory. (You should also try changing it up on different levels so there’s a new celebration matching the theme of the level each time.)

Over-All

I think this game has potential if you go outside of the box and make it special like a 2D version. But without your own touch per-say it’s just going to be another game out there. Remember make it your own. Best of luck.

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Its getting there, theres a few kinda buggy bits, its not obvious when you win a race. also sometime the spinning red beams and the up and down blue beams spwan too close to each other. But mostly you just need better graphics for everything.

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