Feedback on my game

Hello, everyone. I’m working on my first game ever, and I’d like some feedback on the game, particularly the spawn.
Here is the link to the game:
https://www.roblox.com/games/5618867333/The-Obby-Lobby-Tester-Edition
I would really love feedback particularly on the spawn area, and then some of the obbys. Just like, out of ten, what do you think of the spawn, some of the obbys, etc.
Thank you very much.
EDIT: Please note that because of the current roblox speech bubble bug, the NPCs don’t say the current thing. For that reason sadly, the tutorial isn’t finished.

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It’s really cool but the game could use a bit more scenery.

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Where at do you think I could put more scenery? The spawn, or in one of the obbys?

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I saw your note about the NPC’s. I would suggest creating a separate GUI at the bottom of the screen where the NPC’s could talk.

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Yes, I’m working on that right now, thank you.

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This is a really great game, but when I was playing one of the obbies I noticed that the background colors and the obby itself are a little too vibrant and colorful, making it hard to see all of the obstacles. Other than that all good.

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Thank you for the feedback! When I was originally making the game, I had all the obstacles as grey, but I thought that was a little too boring, so I made them bright and colorful. Maybe I should change them back.

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Awesome! Keep up the good work!

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