So I just released this game! What do you think?
Also keep in mind this is my first big project!
https://www.roblox.com/games/5797143263/Dayron-Grill-V1-GRAND-OPENING
This is good, things to note:
- Animations for food eating are dull.
- I hit the wall before knowing where the entrance was.
- All the entrances are confusing because they’re the same as the glass walls.
- Killing whoever goes through the reception staff area maybe too much, how about teleporting them further away from there.
- Besides having a menu button/box to press, you can display the menu where you have “ORDER HERE” in red.
- The Overhead UI is big, maybe decrease the size a bit, and try to remove the rainbow name, make it 1 color instead.
- Improve UI Overall.
Though I find these good:
- The scenery, buildings, are all very nice.
- A lot of detail was put into this game.
- Good sitting areas.
- Good service, well it’s depending.
I find this game well made, and deserves more.
I will take a visitor’s perspective while adding some of my own thoughts.
So I met someone in-game who gave me a mini-tour, your group made the place in a month? Just from walking around, I found myself admiring the builds. The outside, inside, and small details of the joint are well made. The animated avatars of the development team is a nice touch that adds that “company” feeling. I can see the place able to fully engage players for long amounts of time.
In short, I was impressed by the game and its full of potential. Gave a like and favorite
@Toefl I will add some of your suggestions to V1.1!
@GuestLord Thanks for the feedback. Also, I was the only developer, the statues are from SHR members of the group.