Feedback on my Gamepass Icon

Hello, I am Snowy. and I have finally begun my journey as a GFX Artist! and I would like some feedback on my first GFX (I’m assuming gamepass icons fall under this category)

❆ - x2 Backpack Space ← The name of the gamepass should describe what it does

It’s not that I don’t like it… Something is just off for me so I wanted to get a few pairs of fresh eyes to look at it for me :smiley:

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Hello! It looks great but my eyes cant stand the brightness of the sparkles, maybe make the sparkles less bright or just less sparkles.

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i think it’s because of the sparkles that’s making it strange, try adding less sparkles or make the green background a bit darker

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This is honestly amazing! The sparkles is the one that hit me. It’s a little too bright and maybe you could make it less brighter? Besides that, it is amazing and well made!

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Honestly, this looks amazing it’s just the sparkles it’s too bright maybe make the sparkles a little bit less bright it might look better.

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If you didn’t look at the name of the gamepass, you would still be able to tell what it does based off of the picture. Pretty good

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its nice but add in some shadows to it like depth, that would look better

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Looks great! Personally I don’t mind the sparkles that much, but would love to see a version of it without them so I can get a clearer idea of it. Other than that, well done!

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