What do you think? I’m pretty proud of myself as this is really my first piece of graphics art that I’ve every done lol
edit: added poll
- Looks great!
- Needs improvement (comment)
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I added a poll to make it easy to give feedback
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I’m not going to pretend that I’m a graphic designer. Because I’m not. I am only a scripter. Here’s my opinion: There’s just way too much red, and nothing really makes it pop. I think it’s the background that’s throwing me off. I would try to avoid the red background. Maybe a soft yellow? I think everything can always use improvement. 
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Thanks for your input! I’ll see what I can do.
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For a first graphic, it’s neat! Perhaps decrease the amount of those red lines and increase the size of those that remain.
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It’s a bit too intense for my eyes I reckon you should make the background less lines but not too little. Good for a start! I totally agree with zenvxs, not sure how we pretty much created the exact same comment at the exact same time. Another thing is that the heart should have the same shading as the text instead of a black outline. Personally I think those comments will make it look better.
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I think the game pass icon is too dark. I would brighten it up a little.
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Thank you for your feedback @zenvxs and @cobaysaurus_rex and @ardrous! I’ll try to post an updated version soon.
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I tried to edit a couple things according to your suggestions. Any better?
- Better than before
- About the same
- Worse
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The outline on the original made it look better and gave it more depth maybe you could try making a black outline around the circle like this:
As you can see i made a perfect circle with no mistakes but this would look good in my opinion
All the gamepass Icons that I find for popular simulators don’t have a black outline but some have a colored outline. Maybe I’ll try that.
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Looks like you took the heart from the internet and doesn’t fit with the style of the text. I think it would look better if you made them both the same sort of style.
Well, I did 
How would I make it fit the style?
The heart has a black border while the text doesn’t, the text has a better drop shadow than the heart. For me, the heart just looks out of place.