Feedback on my games new lobby

A kinda lobby type bridge/spawn area thing I made please send any feedback!


Bridge :slight_smile:

all feedback welcome

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the tree is inside the rock lol, i dont think trees grow on rocks

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Ye kinda went into the tree, ill change it later lol

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I feel like the terrain needs so work, maybe try using some meshes or add some depth to the current ones by extending the grass out or adding some curves, other than that great job!

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Looks good, just make sure to really push yourself in your builds if you want to improve.

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Hello!

Thank you @frvgments, @Moonlo99, and @AceofspadesVI6 for the wonderful replies, Hopefully I will improve my builds with this feedback

~Truthful_Shadow

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Looks really amazing! Yes, there are some things to improve like over here
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That leaf from the tree is just floating, I’m not sure if it’s supposed to be like that but, there should be an extra branch there (Correct me if I’m wrong)

Overall, amazing job and keep practicing more you’ll improve so much!

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It’s a good start. I’d suggest adding more things to do. You’ve never seen a lobby without anything to do, whether it be a shop, a small minigame, etc.

I suggest looking up examples for this. Epic Minigames has an interesting lobby that matches your style.

Also, don’t feel restricted with the borders you created on the map; it’s your baseplate, build however you want :stuck_out_tongue:

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Hello, @h_unt, @chrisby_bacon and @Musketfall

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The problem above is most likely from:

  • Anchoring and un-anchoring parts, while taking this screenshot studio was in “Run” mode so it may have unanchored.
    That leaf from the tree is just floating, I’m not sure if it’s supposed to be like that but, there should be an extra branch there (Correct me if I’m wrong)

This lobby is under continuous development:

  • And soon there will be a Shop and yes the borders are there because I want players to feel like they are in a mountainous valley on a bridge surrounded by vegetation, Due to me not using Roblox Terrain I have come to a halt on that Idea.

Thank-you all for the constructive and amazing feedback!

~Truthful_Shadow

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Ok, Thank-you for the reply :slight_smile:

Just like what @Moonlo99 said, there’s another tree/rock thing lol
but I do like it :smile:

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