I made this gfx today but feels like its not good, so i am just looking for suggestions and tips to improve them.
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This looks amazing, there isn’t much to change about this.
The only recommendation that I have is to experiment with the lighting a bit, as it seems a bit dim for the beach, unless you’re looking to have that type of atmosphere.
And see how the umbrella looks without the little glow outline, since it seems a bit odd to me.
Hope this helped! 
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Backround is kinda, eh, doesn’t look like it fits with the sand, feels more cartoony then everything else
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Thankyou for the feedback i do agree with lighting thats what i have major struggle with always. ill try to improve that.
i agree i just took whatever background i thought looked close enough
take away the particle brush/stock dots, focus the camera more on them instead of inbetween the beach and sky and add some depth of field focusing on the characters
Looks great! But I feel like green and pink fit togheter that well, but thats just me. Maybe add some textures on the paraplu or whatever its called. Maybe add some textures to the sword or smt. Sorry if you had some of this Im just very blind hehe
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Looks pretty good but here are some things you could fix, first of all the backround, im not sure if you used a HDRI or not but if not then I recommend to (find a good fitting one). Also its a bit dim with the lighting, otherwise its pretty good.
looks like someone created a beach in machu picchu so i’d suggest adding a clear sky background or something else
Oh wow! I’m in love this this, it looks very detailed! However, only thing I would change it making the background a beach and removing the snow particles; the reason is because this feels like something you would see on a beach, not a mountain. But other than that, very well done! : )
Woah it looks great! I absolutely love the lighting. For me I feel like the background doesn’t really blend in/ doesn’t fit the scene, but that might just be my personal preference. Keep up the great work!! 
I like it! Just a couple of tips:
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Clean up the GFX a bit; I think the characters have a lot of small accessories that aren’t really needed here (unless that is a feature of the characters you’d like to keep) It looks a bit messy.
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Also the sword of the dude on the left sticks out a bit, I would suggest removing that if it’s okay with you, as it is a little disturbing to the overall theme of this GFX. The wings on the girl look okay for the most part, but removing them also would definitely clean the GFX up a bit.
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Another thing are the small accessories on the table. I would suggest removing the vase (apologies if i’m wrong) and the small bowl, and just keep the mug. I think that would also make the GFX look cleaner.
That’s it. Looks great!
This looks great! I just feel like if there’s a way to lighten up the colour of the sand a whole lot, then you should try that! That way the background is not gonna look out of place!
This is amazing! One suggestion though.
The background is a bit plain. It would look a lot better with a bright & vibrant beach or something. It doesn’t really make sense to have mountains.
Apart from that, good job! 
I like it although I don’t think it fits at all. It seems like their at the beach but then behind them doesn’t give off very much beachy vibes you know? If I go to a beach I also think the characters could’ve had some type of beach vibes? But the GFX is really detailed and I love that!
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I don’t think the lighting quite lines up with the background, you can easily fix that by either reorienting the lights rotating the scene and then rendering it (and put that layer on your other effects you put in post processing and maybe color correct the gfx itself it bit since it’s looking a lot darker and warmer than the background) also uh the overlays/effects you put over it doesn’t really look good