Hello! I need some feedback on the GFX I just made, and give me some tips if you can to help me out.
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I personally think the guy should be aiming the gun, not holding it how he is right now.
Thank you for your opinion. I’ll try my best to improve the GFX.
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Greetings, I’m NicolaiXeno.
From a perspective view the GFX looks nice but i’d probably make it so that the soldier holds the AK-47 properly, such as keeping the realistic pose for it.
Here’s a reference:
Cheers!
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Looks really good man. I like how the background blends with the render
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Thank you for the feedback! I’ll do my best to improve the GFX.
Some feedback on your GFX-
Maybe you could improve the pose, might just be me but he looks to be holding the gun weird. You could use some real life references of people holding guns to help you. The render shows enough to make it look like he is walking, but because of the background he looks like he would be floating. The lighting is quite off, the sun is behind him in the image but on the render the light source is infront of him. Not sure if you used a HDRI or not, but if you did, try combining them with other lights and rotating it so it is positioned correctly. If you aren’t using a HDRI, you could try experimenting with some until you find what you think looks good. Personally, I don’t really like the smoke at the bottom - it looks quite uneeded.
Hope this helps, good luck.
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Good job on your GFX. The character looks good, with a lot of detail. One thing you may want to improve on, as others have stated, is how he is holding the gun. Right now the position of his hands on the gun looks unrealistic.
Aside from that, good job.
The amount of effects on top make it seem blurry, notably around the face which should be kept more clear as a focal point of the picture
Id probably add some more stuff to help the face stand out like glint on the sunglasses too, or Id do it for the gun depending on what you want to stand out