Feedback on my GFX

Many of you may have seen me before! But here is another of my weird

work for you guys to judge!

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The text colour doesn’t fit the vibe of the GFX, I suggest making it white without any shadows but nonetheless it looks great.

If you’re going for a zombie artwork, definitely add a face or make the skin green so it’s evident - it looks weird for 2 humanoids to be staring directly at each other.

edit: move the text a bit upwards so it’s easier to read

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It looks okay! But the text doesn’t really fit the vibe and you can improve more on the lighting maybe put something in the background or even just play around with it, but you should definitely change that text. But otherwise, it looks sick.

Don’t tell me you just copied the same render on the other side…??

Text

  • 1st off, too much green outline & + green and purple don’t match that clearly.
    Add the color as in RED then outline it with WHITE OR BLACK and see if that matches.

Render

  • Render has no sort of hand movement, make the hand move a little like tilt it or something.
  • And please don’t just paste the same thing, it looks really weird.

I hope this helps, remember the more you improve the better! :+1:

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no i didn’t i used both in blender

Honestly looks great the text is a bit off in my opinion. And is the “Whe” meant to be “We”. Try find a font/create a text that fits into that GFX, otherwise, it’s okay! 8/10.

It’s not if you look carefully the details don’t match. I do agree with the first one tho.

Again just as the top.