Hello i just made some gfx for my simulator and i would like to get some feedback here are some pictures:
Thank you!
Thank you!
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In the first one, the limbs seem a bit “puffy” I guess. I think removing that would be beneficial.
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I really like the first one, it looks pretty good. I feel like the shadows in the second one look a bit off.
Better than anything I could do.
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Hey! Love both! “Spoon Simulator” sounds like a fairly simplistic name, and so your design, which is nice and simple, would match up excellently.
The game icon is supposed to be a square, so I’m guessing your game icon is the first GFX. The only thing I’d suggest adjusting is the position of the spoon. Maybe you could move it so that it looks like the character is “holding” it.
For the second GFX, I agree with @BattleLogic on the positio of the shadows. Try and keep them consistent.
Overall, great job! Keep making them.
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Both of them look great! Although I do recommend turning down the exposure because you can see a bit of grain in both of the photos.
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Wow, it’s really smooth! Both of them! This is great for your first GFX.
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i feel like the lighting of the first one is a bit whack, its really dark on the hands but with the face its really bright.
second gfx looks nice though
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I feel like the text doesn’t really fit in and the characters look like they’re made of plastic. Other than that, I don’t see a problem in it.
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You slash with your spoon and fight other players and sell your slashes and you buy new spoons and you upgrade your DNA and you buy new pets its a normal simulator
The first one is way too bright, and the character isn’t textured very well. In my opinion, he looks like a hot air balloon. The lighting also looks very poorly rendered. The shading is very sharp and unrealistically dark when contrasted to the extremely bright face.
The second one looks okay. Again, maybe experiment with lighting and shading, as well as playing around with textures and such.
Now that GFX looks really nice,
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I like them, but on the 2nd image you should put the text together, not apart.
Overall, it’s good, so keep up the great work!
Didn’t you see he made a new one for the second gfx?
Nice job! Here is some friendly feedback:
The Good Things
Posing looks great for the first one, the background has that nice simulator-y look. I could say the lighting is decent for the second one. 
Things to Improve On
The first one’s lighting is way too bright, and the hands are extremely dark. Try balancing out the lighting! The second thumbnail’s posing is awkward, maybe if he was running or doing something more interesting. I also think the text requires a touch-up, to something that looks more aesthetically pleasing.
Good job! 