It is alright. But i think i could have made it better. What do you all think?
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This is okay. The lighting on the objects seem a bit strange though. It looks like they are pngs put on a background. Maybe change the lighting a bit so it doesn’t look like it was a png. Good work. 
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Im sorry but I will have to say You need to make big Improvements. This is not bad but a tons of Improvement can be made. the lighting is really bad. Why does the noob have lights on the left and the right While the domino guy / you has no lights. this needs to be fixed. the environment looks horrible. What is this suppose to mean? that does not look like an obby, Just a random box with thanos gaunlet for some reasons?? I can Make a gfx to show you how you should make your environment. But thats only if you ask me for help. Which you clearly did not yet. Well the render’s quality is not good. the textures of the characters are not the best and the joints look messed up. you should be using a rig instead of roblox studio Importing. A rig would make it look much much better. The text is looking alright tho it could as well get Improvements by turning the text into a real logo. d’ont take this harsh its not your fault. Although it kinda is. But I know you can become better. We were all at that rookie state and We are all going to become better together. D’ont mind asking me for help I will help you if you need help.
Sincerly from pikachuraya gfx designer with 2 years of experience 
I don’t really like how you commented on this… 80% of your reply is just “this is bad, why is it like this?”
without actually giving useful information, for the most part. you did give some advice but that was just about 2 lines.
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ok so whats up? I am giving him lines of advice and even offering him my help personally. And you are criticazing me?? whats wrong? If you comment you should be saying something “Useful” other than complaining about someone elses comment. I clearly said That I have nothing wrong with him or his art so why are you complaining about me? Its not the first time you complain about me I already saw you somewhere. Pls stop complaining and mind something called your own business. I am here giving feedback and you are not. he is asking for feedback on his gfx not feedback on people’s answers.
I hope you Have a nice day/night
pls do not make people angry like that. You have chance I can keep my cool down. so you should revise your own answers. 
What i said is that your comment was for the most part useless, in a nutshell. now, my comment wasn’t directlly related , but, the way you comment is just wrong. you expand to much on a single though.
“What’s wrong?”
There is nothing wrong, im just replying to a comment, is something you can do,.
“I am giving him lines of advice and even offering him my help personally. And you are criticazing me??”
Yours weren’t lines of advice, at least for the most part. you didn’t give much help at all,
“Pls stop complaining and mind something called your own business”
Do you really think you’re untouchable? welcome to being in a community. communities is about giving advice, i feel like im repeating myself, since your questions are really similar,
" I clearly said That I have nothing wrong with him or his art so why are you complaining about me?"
And then? will that make you untouchable from feedback? no. instead of replying as to why im wrong you repeat yourself with useless questions . I think that repling to my comment saying replying to another comment is wrong is kinda of ironic, this is kinda flooding the chat,about the last note:
“pls do not make people angry like that. You have chance I can keep my cool down. so you should revise your own answers.
”
what are you talking about? how do i make you angry with a reply? anyways ill read your last reply and stop, I already did my mistakes with this random drama
Thank you for your feedback, and yeah i do need some help. Make a gfx so that i can see how i should make an environment. You can check if i made the game icon, group icon and the gamepass icons good if you want to. Oh and that box is an obby, i just make boxes so that my obby looks different from other roblox obbies.
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Oh I see! Btw My Discord is BloxsDevs#8239
Send me a request and I will help you with my pleasure! I am sure you have pontential on becoming an good gfx designer. Text me In Discord I will start working as soon as you send me the request. I’ll explain to you In details what you should be doing and using to make your art way better! See ya there!
Hello there!
I think what @EliteEngineer_DEV meant was that your feedback towards the Graphic design
was extremely harsh and negative, which will only lead to the person who asked for feedback to give up
rather than cheer up.
in this community, we all support each other and help each other to grow and in a very positive most efficient
way possible and you might want to learn how to achieve positive constructive reviews so people could understand
you more and think of your review as a positive or a motive for them to continue what they are doing in a better way.
I am not saying your review was bad or not right it’s just as others would say “Rude”.
Let me point out some of what you wrote as an example:
Now that I have shown you some examples of how “Rude” and unconstructive your review is let me
re-write what you wrote in a way that sounds more peaceful and in a comfortable way for the poster
to read and feel cheerful and motivated to create more things.
Hello @CookiesAreBeast123, I really like the concept of your Graphics and how you were trying to achieve it.
However, there are some points you might need to improve in your Graphics.
Here are some points to help you work out some of these improvements:
- The concept is a “Meme Obby” so I would highly recommend using a relative concept to it for example using a famous meme as a thumbnail that the majority would recognize.
- I have noticed that the light is a little bit weak you might need to figure out how to improve the lighting, I can help you with that using relative ways and methods that I use to improve surrounded lightning in my graphics.
- The characters formations seems to be outdated and published right from the Studio, you might want to consider using rigs that way you could improve the details of your characters and add a cartoony look to them that would seem fun.
- You could really improve the quality of your image just by bringing the camera up close so you don’t have to cover the unnecessary parts of the obby that doesn’t need to show or just simply raise the rendering quality in the software you are using.
Now for the positive Points:
- The text seems just fine, Cartoony and simple plus it doesn’t cover up most of the thumbnail to show what is going on in it.
- I can completely see the obby formation that the character/you goes through, which what obby stands for “Obstacle Course” where the players will have to face memes as an obstacle course.
Overall you have done a very good job on the graphics as a starter and you can improve even further with practice and experience.
Even though I can’t imagine how you would receive the help but if you need it
you can contact @pikachuraya’s discord BloxsDevs#8239.
Good day everyone.
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Thanks, yeah i am new to this, that’s why it is not that good.
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I love the way you talked about the situation, and handled the feedback in a nice clean way, nice job
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