i don’t know if this this is the right category but i need feedback on my gfx
im not becoming a gfx maker
so this is the pics
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I have to say the typography used doesn’t really work, and the colors don’t really match with the image. I’d use a display typography that portrays the message better, or a neutral typography with the right colors
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Uh thanks its my first time using blender and making gfx
Looks good, but for some reason there is a certain amount of blur or distortion on the edges of the pictures that is rather off putting to me.
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Oh Uhh but thanks for the feedback i will work on those in the future
It’s looking nice, but the lighting seems a bit off in the last image. I’d also recommend changing the color and the font of the text…
For the first image, I will recommend the “Depth of field” or something.
I will also recommend adding watermarks for all of the work you make public.
Those are my opinions and my personal preferences., feel free to disagree with me.
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Oh ok thank you i will do that
I would recommend changing the text because it does not fit very well, and making the backgrounds a bit different, but really nice work! 
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Ooh ok dude i will work on that soon
The first thing I see is the lighting. It’s really off, and doesn’t fit with the background
The text and font doesn’t fit at all and looks way too bold.
In addition the poses are stiff, I recommend trying to find Blender rigs on YouTube
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Oh thank you i
will fix that and watch some blender videos
ALOT better than the first one, keep up the good work!! But on the 2nd screenshot, the blue text doesnt really fit the image in my opinion try keeping it in 1 color or 2 diffrent colors that both fit the picture!
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Yea Thanks i appreciate it 
Oh ok i will work on that all
thank you-
Creating designs in Blender does take practice to have a more appealing scene you just need to experiment with different ideas and features, in fact I do recommend learning how to add lighting in your scene to reflect shadows off the characters, the backgrounds you’ve chosen look low quality did you experiment with HRDI?
If you want simple ideas on what to add you could always experiment with different selections the first designs and improved designs, need some improvements in addition to the lighting and quality. You could even add some simple props in the background if there ever needed.
There is a few empty corners and space in your 2nd version attempt. If your losing ideas it’s always good to get small ideas from existing graphic designs to use as an example, I just feel like you should work on your lighting and implementing a more high quality background.
It’s a start to something all you have to do is continue to learn new things and practice; as that’s a way you will improve overtime.
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Although the font looks unique, it’s still off. The GFX is well lit and definitely has the vibe of a murder game, but still may need some improvement with the character as they seem to almost be in game stills
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Hmm So your saying i should use a different character like a bloxy one?
here is some more not related to my game
For all of these I would recommend working on the lighting, but more importantly the backgrounds on any of them seem to just be gray or stock images off of google, I would recommend either building a more relevant background in studio and importing that into blender as well or atleast get a background from google which matches the render, also the font really isn’t that great but that’s subjective.
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