So i made a quick gfx! and i would like to hear your opinions about that!
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It looks simple, but I recommend bending the limbs more.
is it looking bad ?just wanna ask.
No, that is not what I meant; it looks good.
It’s trying to be cartoony which is great!
but something about it is wrong and I can’t lay a finger on it.
I like this, but I think you should detail the background too. It looks too simple, for example the wall. Other than that everything is fine. Good luck!
Looks simple, I would make it better by bending the limbs more so it gives more of a arm gestures, R15 it is I meant to say.
Also, how about giving it a cinematic look to it, tweak the lighting and cinematic look on it
i actually like r6 more so yeah.Thanks for freedback!
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I would personally add something on the walls, especially in the middle part of it.
Then, on the left side of the GFX, the corner of the building kind of unbalances it for the eye, add maybe a car between the corner of the building and the soldier.
Next, I’d work on the lighting a little bit to create contrast between the important objects in the GFX and the actual background.
As for the parts behind the window bars, I would rather have them instead of gray, do a darker color (even black works in my opinion).
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I think it could use more work, maybe make those boxes more detailed instead of looking like just parts. But overall it is much better than what I could do.
its probably just me but it looks like the camera is a tad bit too close, the soldier on the right could have his weapon in frame, also just nitpicking but he’s wearing a civilian flight helmet with camo on it, you could also add some minor details like depth of field effects, vignette, etc and it would look good
Looks great, you could maybe add texture, detail and better lighting and shading, but overall it’s good for a start!
It’s looking good, but maybe you can add a few details.
Looks awesome! Nice and partly simple but really nice and effective. Maybe one thing is to bend the limbs a bit more and change to R15 rather than R6 to make even more effective but good job 
The army men look a little off in the picture, the background is mostly low poly however, the army men look more realistic rather than low poly.
Also, the road looks a little weird too because a car can easily crash into the building so, try to rotate the road horizontally rather than letting it be vertical.