Feedback on my GFX

So I saw Kortex’s speed GFX video (original here: The Detective | ROBLOX GFX SPEEDART | - YouTube) and decided to make a clone of it.

It basically turned out like a Walmart version of his, in short.

Open to criticism! :slight_smile:

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It looks good kinda dark though I would suggest adding more light

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I like it, mysterious. I’m getting a detective, secret agent vibe. Good work :+1:

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Looks super cool. I could say that your GFX compared to Kortexes is that he uses more textures and higher detail something I can definetly see you improving on. Overall a solid GFX I could see on a game thumbnail.

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I really like this and I would most likely click on this if I saw this on the front games page, since of course this is the type of GFX on the front page. This really looks like an amazing GFX. The lighting is a bit dark but, I’d say since it’s darker. it really gives out the secret agent vibe. Good job! :+1:

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A little bit dark and plain maybe add few more objects like a bench.

It’s cool but add a bit more depth into the ground because it seems just a little flat. Maybe change the texture entirely because in my opinion, grassy bricks just don’t go well with a city, add something like this.

or like this:

I also agree with this , add a bit more objects, a few benches would be easiest I assume.

Overall I would rate this a 7/10

Wow I love the pose the lighting and everything! Maybe effects like dust ?

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