Feedback on my GFX

Feedback on GFX

Hello! For the past few months, I have been trying to learn how to make roblox GFX, and I personally think I have gotten pretty far. I would love to get some honest feedback, on my two most recent Thumbnails, both made as personal projects.
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Questions:

  • Do you guys think, I am skilled enough to begin taking commissions?
  • Do you have any helpful tips, for becoming a GFX artist?
  • What can I do to improve my work?

Thank you for your time

// Please Notice that this is my first post on the DevForum, Sorry if I made a mistake :frowning:

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Here’s what you should do.

  • To improve your work you could use HDRI’s and Improve your lighting.
  • You are skilled enough to become a GFX Artist but I would wait a bit until you think about doing commissions.
  • None of the words are censored on the Roblox Platform, so???
  • Guns are used in multiple games on roblox, even roblox themselves have featured working gun models.
  • Kids will cry? I… I guess.

Greetings to Nigeria!

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Yes Definitely anyone who takes you will be thankful for hiring you bro, good job! :stuck_out_tongue:

In my opinion, Roblox is not a platform solely dedicated to Child Friendly content. It also includes games targeted at an entirely different age group. And although these games might not make as much money as “Adopt me”, or a random Toy Car game, they are what personally keeps me engaged in the platform, and I am sure I am not the only one who feels this way.
To answer your report of spamming:

I was literally just accepted 2 hours ago.

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i dont see how its inapropriate and roblox has allowed and even created some of the stuff like that itself

Seeing a lot of weird stuff in the comments…

These look pretty nice, but the lighting could be better. The rain effect on the second image is below par, and an officer is only holding the gun with one hand, the other is just awkwardly there.

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if i were to hire you, i wouldn’t;
you have a good start, but can definitely improve more on lighting and focus (the background particularly in the second image could use a bit of blur)
p.s. don’t feed the trolls, just report them and forget about it

This is bad for kids see? This message (reply) and others should be flagged because you are using bad words.
And you said you’re a roblox staff eh’?, then why don’t we see your roblox administration badge?

Hmmm… roblox staff…

I really like the gfx!

Definitely!

I think lighting could be worked on, but ofc that takes time.
:slight_smile:

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Thank you for the feedback. I did notice something was slightly off with that rain. I tried to find a tutorial on how to properly do postprocessing rain for roblox GFX, but was unable to find one.

Perhaps you know of a good tutorial for this?

Really Insane!

I recommend you watching GFX Comet or Other Videos, to help you Improve!

They’re both way too dark.
Your font choices are not the best.
Why do all characters use the same face.

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I am not a a GFX maker/designer, but I can tell just by looking at this that the lighting could be improved. Other than that, everything is pretty good. You could definitely start selling these but probably only for a low price and you can go higher as you improve. I hope this was helpful.