Feedback on my graphics

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#1

Yes, I currently use the software

Can you rate some of my clothing group graphics?T&C|256x256

If you would like more graphics, please DM me. I am happy to send you them for judgement.

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#2

Colors

Your choice of colors is very unique, the colors
blend together perfectly so I wouldn’t suggest changing the colors.

Aesthetics

I like the fact that you have used more than one font style in your graphics design and I also like the fact that you made the character smooth.


But there are only two things that I would suggest changing:

  • Shading ~ Personally, I think that you have added a bit too much shading to the image and you could removed some of it.

  • Blur ~ Blur is good for the graphics design but I think that you have added a bit too much blur, so I would recommend removing some blurriness too.

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#3

Your render and text looks really nice. The colour choice is great but you should try adding hints of white or gradiant.

However, as @AmusingDev stated:

It’s a bit too blury.

#4

I cannot really find any major issues/places for improvements other than that blur issue others have stated.

Positives

  • Great design, it flows well

  • Good lighting, especially for software such as paint(dot)net and Blender

  • The font ties in with the design, the drop shadow was done well

Price

I would estimate this to be worth at least :robux: 200 - 600. It’s quite professional.

#5

Your color choice is nice, but you could try more than cafe graphics so you can do a more variety instead of the same things. The problem with doing only cafe graphics is that you won’t be doing dynamic poses and dynamic lighting. Try and use an r6 rig in Blender to pose the limbs and get better poses. Since the lighting is quite simple maybe you could add some lighting effects like rim lighting to give realism and make it look more pleasing to the eyes.

#6

The lighting is pretty cool, but you should put some shadows in her.
You also should use ‘‘rigs’’ to make the character have a position more natural.
I recommend joining this discord for almost every asset: Discord

#7

Thank you, I will work on it!

This feedback will be helpful in the future.

#8

I have more graphics, this is just one I felt should be acknowledged in a way. I can show you more if you would like. I need professional feedback as I am kind of new to this type of enviroment.

#9

I don’t like it; i think i would just scroll past this ad if i saw it. The clothing is hard to see because of the bloom in the picture; its r6 instead of r15 so it looks very stiff and lifeless. The text has a good font; but gradients are back in style; and the text would look better with a gradient.

#10

Thank you for your feedback! If I were to post something, what would draw your attention? This is just one of many other graphics. If you would like to see them you can always DM me! :slight_smile:

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#11

Just wanted to let you know, asking for prices is now against the rules on dev forum, so you should probably remove that part!

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#12

The graphics is very well done, my only suggestion would be to darken the background or chose a color that’s complementary to the main focal point of the graphic.

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This is a color guide I use when I’m working on art work and graphics. Hope it helps you too!

#13

Ok i’ll keep this short because other users already commented on most of the issues. Some stuff that could make it better is adding overlay effects and bending limbs and stuff. I’m not too good with renders but I know a good community that is.

-Edit it would allow the link but RGC (Roblox Graphics Community) is a great source for this stuff

#14

Thank you for your feedback!

First off, thank you for the suggestions. Second, I like your builds/designs.

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