Hi there! I would like some feedback on my first group art design.
Thanks for reading!
Looks Amazing Keep up the Good Work
Iād suggest you to make the āHappiness Never Dieā words brighter or change the color of it to make it more obvious. But overall, great job, keep up the work!
I will remake it just like your suggestion.
Btw thanks!
Version 2:
Hello! I think this is a really cute graphic.
Hereās some feedback I hope you can find useful
By contrasting the background and the elements, you can make the latter stand out!
But this is just a subjective opinion from me, and in the end, if you love your graphic, thatās really all that matters. I love your palette choice of pink and purple and adding a matching orange to it.
I like the overall approach your going for. It would look more better - improved if it included outline glow around the text or āheartā just so it gives the design a little more pop rather than being dull as well as having more vibrant colors or colour scheme.
Recommend as well. But if youāre going for a simplicity look, it looks good already maybe include a little bird next by the āDie textā.
However, Iām assuming the design is a friendship logo, or something along those to line helping developers?
If this is a logo for a group it should have info on what the group is about logos normally have some sort of information that will give users a good overall view something you should do is spice the background and give the text a outline glow make it more attractive overall good attempt.
Really, thereās far too much going on. A general rule to follow is that āless is moreā ā donāt overcrowd the image, donāt overdo the effects.
Right now, there are loads of hearts, loads of Roblox logos, a leaf border, flowers, confettiā¦ and thatās not counting the shield, the hearts, and the text above it.
If this is for a logo, stick to the shield. You also donāt need really two Roblox logos and āRobloxā spelled out on the shield. Itās very obvious that itās for Roblox.
This is frankly a case of overcrowding. It would look a lot better if it was a lot more basic.