Feedback on my group design

[dosceh (coquille)]

Hi there! I would like some feedback on my first group art design.

Thanks for reading!

[N41h3n (Nathen)]

Looks Amazing Keep up the Good Work

[Jake_GamesYt0 (Jak)]

I’d suggest you to make the “Happiness Never Die” words brighter or change the color of it to make it more obvious. But overall, great job, keep up the work!

[dosceh (coquille)]

I will remake it just like your suggestion.
Btw thanks!

[dosceh (coquille)]

I just add some more things to make it better or not if it’s by in your opinion.

Version 2:

I remake it like 3 times so tell me if this design ok or not.

[g_captain]

Hello! I think this is a really cute graphic.
Here’s some feedback I hope you can find useful

1. The “Happiness Never Die” text’s color clashes with the background, making the treshold “vibrate”. Both colors are very saturated and of the same lightness. Try changing the text color to the light pink of the paper hearts, and desaturating the background a little:

Summary

By contrasting the background and the elements, you can make the latter stand out!

2. Similar to changing the color of the text, I’d suggest making the colors a little more consistent. In this preview I tried matching the emblem closer to the color of the hearts and flowers, and the top corners to match the warmer orange flowers.

Result

But this is just a subjective opinion from me, and in the end, if you love your graphic, that’s really all that matters. I love your palette choice of pink and purple and adding a matching orange to it.

[jordonh23]

I like the overall approach your going for. It would look more better - improved if it included outline glow around the text or “heart” just so it gives the design a little more pop rather than being dull as well as having more vibrant colors or colour scheme.

Recommend as well. But if you’re going for a simplicity look, it looks good already maybe include a little bird next by the “Die text”.

However, I’m assuming the design is a friendship logo, or something along those to line helping developers?

If this is a logo for a group it should have info on what the group is about logos normally have some sort of information that will give users a good overall view something you should do is spice the background and give the text a outline glow make it more attractive overall good attempt.

[Castlemore]

Really, there’s far too much going on. A general rule to follow is that “less is more” – don’t overcrowd the image, don’t overdo the effects.

Right now, there are loads of hearts, loads of Roblox logos, a leaf border, flowers, confetti… and that’s not counting the shield, the hearts, and the text above it.

If this is for a logo, stick to the shield. You also don’t need really two Roblox logos and ‘Roblox’ spelled out on the shield. It’s very obvious that it’s for Roblox.

This is frankly a case of overcrowding. It would look a lot better if it was a lot more basic.