Feedback on my group design

Hi there! I would like some feedback on my first group art design. :grin:


Thanks for reading! :grin: :+1:

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Looks Amazing Keep up the Good Work

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Iā€™d suggest you to make the ā€œHappiness Never Dieā€ words brighter or change the color of it to make it more obvious. But overall, great job, keep up the work!

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I will remake it just like your suggestion. :grin:
Btw thanks! :smile: :smile:

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I just add some more things to make it better or not if itā€™s by in your opinion. :smile:

Version 2:


I remake it like 3 times so tell me if this design ok or not. :+1:

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Hello! I think this is a really cute graphic.
Hereā€™s some feedback I hope you can find useful :slight_smile:

  1. The ā€œHappiness Never Dieā€ textā€™s color clashes with the background, making the treshold ā€œvibrateā€. Both colors are very saturated and of the same lightness. Try changing the text color to the light pink of the paper hearts, and desaturating the background a little:
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By contrasting the background and the elements, you can make the latter stand out!

  1. Similar to changing the color of the text, Iā€™d suggest making the colors a little more consistent. In this preview I tried matching the emblem closer to the color of the hearts and flowers, and the top corners to match the warmer orange flowers.
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But this is just a subjective opinion from me, and in the end, if you love your graphic, thatā€™s really all that matters. I love your palette choice of pink and purple and adding a matching orange to it. :smiley:

I like the overall approach your going for. It would look more better - improved if it included outline glow around the text or ā€œheartā€ just so it gives the design a little more pop rather than being dull as well as having more vibrant colors or colour scheme.

Recommend as well. But if youā€™re going for a simplicity look, it looks good already maybe include a little bird next by the ā€œDie textā€.

However, Iā€™m assuming the design is a friendship logo, or something along those to line helping developers?

If this is a logo for a group it should have info on what the group is about logos normally have some sort of information that will give users a good overall view something you should do is spice the background and give the text a outline glow make it more attractive overall good attempt.

Really, thereā€™s far too much going on. A general rule to follow is that ā€œless is moreā€ ā€“ donā€™t overcrowd the image, donā€™t overdo the effects.

Right now, there are loads of hearts, loads of Roblox logos, a leaf border, flowers, confettiā€¦ and thatā€™s not counting the shield, the hearts, and the text above it.

If this is for a logo, stick to the shield. You also donā€™t need really two Roblox logos and ā€˜Robloxā€™ spelled out on the shield. Itā€™s very obvious that itā€™s for Roblox.

This is frankly a case of overcrowding. It would look a lot better if it was a lot more basic.