Feedback on my GUI

I was going for a sticky note. This is my first real attempt at making a decent GUI. Let me know what you think.
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Looking great so far! No real suggestions from me on how to improve it. :upside_down_face:

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Honestly looking very nice. Looks like a great notebook UI. Almost like the UI apple uses for its notepad app.

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Not bad, I would suggest putting lines on the UI to resemble a more realistic note but other than that it looks great

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It’s really nice and simple. For many games, less is more. Great job!

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Try experimenting with other text colors other than absolute black/white

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Also maybe different fonts.

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Good idea!

My recommendation would be to add line indicators since it looks like a notepad.

I don’t think you should be inverting the text colors. Unless you’re going for a style with completely different colors (which you aren’t), your text should all have a similar appearance.

I think the all of the text should be slightly lighter (dark grey), and also the title and body should have the same text color instead of two different things. The title’s background color isn’t quite dark enough to look good with white imo either.

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Thanks!

  • From my eye , i think the “black” text should not be solid black but more of a dark grey.
  • A more serious font would probably suit a notepad better , Like Times new roman or something (how to implement that in Roblox i do not know"
  • Also maybe add lighter yellow lines between the writing to give it that little extra bit of resemblance to a notepad.
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    That kind of area.

Other than that I can easily rate this a 7/10 for resemblance and your first attempt , very well done.

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This looks perfect for any game that you have in mind, keep making awesome process on this gui.

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I personally find a label will look more “sticky note-ish” if it has square/sharp edges. Other than that, colors are on point and font is a good choice

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