These look great! But you could add some variety such as instead of it all being candy corn, you could add a pumpkin or maybe a ghost to it. It would be cool if you made some halloween themed shoes to go along with the pants too. Other than that this looks really good!
I like it! But… the [LIMITED EDITION] and all those emojis really bother me.
You shouldn’t even make clothing limited edition. Premium members can just reupload it anyway, thats some lost revenue. You should just keep it up on sale.
20 is not a high price, I would spend 20 robux on a bad shirt. This is actually good, I would be fine with paying upwards of 50 for this shirt. (Though 20 is a good price.)
I guess it all comes down to people’s value of money but I feel most people would be okay with spending 20 robux on this because it is a nice and high quality shirt.
Okay so here’s some feed back, don’t take anything personally and I’m sorry if it comes off as harsh.
Honestly there a few things that could be done better, listed below.
The neck doesn’t fit the average Roblox avatar head, I’d suggest making it wider.
When making a pattern cross from torso to the arms, make sure they remain on both (example below)
Try and give the bottom of the sleeves an end, like a white/black line to wrap around the wrist, just to avoid it looking like a blank cut off. (example below)
As a conclusion I’d say its a very nice shirt and pants, It’d go well with some of the new UGC items for Halloween, and honestly it just has that festive vibe to it, very good work!
Wow thank you soo much for the feedback. To be honest your feedback is the best feedback I hav ever gotten from anyone here. Yes ty now I know how the shirt template works! I will show improvements on the next shirt TYSM