Feedback on my horror game cut scene hallway

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#10

The hallway looks very good!
Maybe 2 code pads can be maybe a bit smaller.

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#11

Do you mean to add mode of a veriatey of materials? Thaks for the reply! :smiley:

#12

The Left one is the smaller and redone keypad tell me what you think of?

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#13

It looks better now.
By the way, is this like facility?

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#14

I’ve never played facility so I’m not sure. But the game is like murder mystery with demons and piggy type escape system and challenges. I’m guessing by the name Facility is an SCP game but I’m not sure lol.

#15

Oh, so its kind of piggy game, it sounds interesting.
So you’re being chased by more demons or by one who managed to escape from “prison”?
Is the place (facility, or a underground place or something else) abandoned?

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#16

So I have planned for more maps in the future the demons are not a big part of it though. It is said the murderer is picked by the escaped demon from the underworld and the demon will “Possess” the killer who is randomly picked so the demons are really just lore but I may add hints to them in the game though. Like hidden “Easter Eggs” to spice things up. but as this is really early in development I am not sure yet and its not on my Trello board so I don’t know.

Edit: I’m not too sure about the multiple as then it could be easier for the whole team to get killed before they can find out who the demons is. but I might add it a game mode in the future I’ll just have to wait and see.

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#17

I love the idea,
And you’re true, whole team can get easily killed with more enemies.
Maybe add like 2 gamemodes? Like story mode and “normal” mode(like piggy/murder mystery). So maybe you have to beat “normal” mode, then you can play story mod and learn about the demons and other stuff.

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#18

I am loving what you’ve already built! One thing you could maybe look into is adding some more textures? Adding realistic textured walls, and adding stains/dirt will make the build even better! Try it out!

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#19

Wow I love that idea I’m going to add that to my Trello list right now Thanks!! :smiley:

#20

Yes I will add that in time thanks for the suggestion @cowboehh Have a great day! :slightly_smiling_face:

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#21

Here is the map after lots more improvement:

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#22

This is looks nice. But i think you shall add some more objects and decoration to the walls, because they look pretty empty!

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#23

Hey developer,

This is very good on its own, but I was wondering if it could be a bit darker to make it more of that scary theme, or even make it darker when you get farther in the hallway. :slight_smile: hope this helps.

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#24

It looks great! I also suggest making it a TINY bit darker, and if this hallway would be apart of a horror cutscene {sorry, if its to much to ask} I suggest making the lights flicker

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#25

I’ve already made the script to make the lights flicker but yes I do agree a little bit darker. Thanks :smiley:

#26

Hi guys thanks for all of your feedback on my build even I shocked myself with it lol. :smiley:

#27

instead of using roblox textures, use the realistic textures to make it more eerie and abandoned. idk if this is high poly or mid poly its up to you. and the circle lights look a little bit off in the type of facility theme. try adding rectangular white lights.

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#28

Hey, i have another idea.
If the place where all madness is happening has rooms, then there can be a room filled with gas , so you would need like gas mask to enter.
(since there are pipes)
But, i really like how hallway looks now :smiley:

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#29

Thanks so much for the support. Yes maybe that will be an item that you will have to acquire. It will make the game harder but at the same time more things to do than just walk around lol. :slightly_smiling_face: