Feedback on my horror game

hi there, i create a game called Project x
heres a render for it

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What I see, it looks good. Try to give a little more lighting or some tool to illuminate it, that would be great. Great work

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I don’t mean to be rude, but the scene seems a little bit empty.
It’s just a brick-wall corridor with a rusty metal trim that leads to darkness.
If the walls had a more appealing design, it would look much better.

So empty , so dark .
Even the word ‘RUN’ is barely visible.
Perhaps adding a few ceiling lighting and make the word brighter is a good start.

Completely agreed with what everyone else said also adding into it maybe add a avatar in front which looks scared also no need to re-render it again just stretch up the brightness and contrast will look great take my work for it.

I feel like I’ve seen this a thousand times over already. Their is no promise of information, no promise of a story. I wouldn’t play this, it’s clear to me it’s just going to be another of the thousand of generic horror games. Also you should take a look at the rules of photography, it would help with framing the image. rules of photograpgy - Google Search

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okay :slight_smile: ill do more better for it