Feedback on my 'Horror' Type game?

So on a alt while I been banned on my main account, I made a game that I published rn cos I had the roblox game saved after logging out of that account, and logging back on this to publish the game. The game has 3 endings, and I found a bug which I don’t know the main reason of it happening, but here ya go the game link:

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Here’s some things that you might want to consider:

IN the first room you spawn in i would have a higher ceiling. Also maybe decorate the room a bit. Add a bookshelf, mug, anything that would give more detail. The man himself could be better modeled .

Change the texture of the missing poster to make it look like paper instead of wood

When you enter the room nearest to you there isn’t a door where you entered so you cant go back. It made me feel disoriented and confused for a second. Maybe add a door where you can go back.

Remove racial descriptions from the bad ending. You could be banned for that. Everything else looked fine.

Make the two doors look identical, it just looks weird if you don’t.

There’s a unique ending but it really doesn’t feel unique to me. Maybe add a cool cutscene like you did with the good ending.

The game itself is short but its a very nice start. I cant wait to see where you go with this.

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Ok, I will improve it later or when I have time. I worked on a simulator and added a new zone, thank you for the feedback on the game.

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