Hello,
I would like feedback on my Icon and Thumbnail for my game, Fishy Business.
The images are below:
What are your opinions on these? What should I improve?
(Please note that I am very new to GFX, so please don’t be harsh :D)
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It’s not the best, probably a 6/10. I suggest using less vivid colors and give more detail of what the game actually is. Fishy business sounds like a simulator game on catching fish and selling it for money (just a guess). It’s pretty basic, it was kinda hard to read “Fishy Business” in this because of how bright the color red was, use maybe a maroon color or less brighter color. I don’t understand why the ‘amazing game’ text is there but I suggest removing it. Overall it’s okay.
Hello!
If you wouldn’t mind, I would like to tell you what Fishy Business is about.
(Sorry if I seem rude, I am not meaning to!)
Fishy Business is a more of a fighting game, where the main weapon is fish.
I will be sure to use your ideas in the final product!
Thank you!
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Do you like this icon better?
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Looks much better! But, one thing I would change would be the fish image. Some players might not know what that looks like from the Discover page on the Roblox site, so I’d recommend making the fish more of a cartoony look, or turn it to face the players screen.
looks a bit blank. the background definitly needs a darker or atleast not yellowish color. more characters would definitly be nice (or atleast more models, like a fish), try to contrast the colors a bit more, the title is just completely super bright red, maybe make the outline a bit darker
nvm didn’t see 2nd icon XD
For marketing this will not work at all. Will just waste your money if you advertise with it.
Try to reduce empty space and add a theme
I updated the default fish model within the game to a more simple and “minecraft”-ish style. I wonder if its too small now…
I could make it larger, but I don’t really know 
Now it glows!
That is one large fish 
I feel the fish should be smaller and also I kinda feel the fish on the shirt looks kinda out of place to be quite honest.
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Maybe make the fishy business text easier to read, cause my face is 1 centimeters away from the screen and it’s kinda hard to read. Yes my eyes do burn from how close I am.
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4/10 it sucks there isnt much going on the wont is weird and the stroke is too… THICC like yo mo- Jokes aside. Would be better if you add some more stuff and remove the glow from the character.
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It’s important to consider how the Icon in particular will appear on the games page, sub-text may be hard to read.
Also, you can easily just do away with the sub-text by getting the point across in the graphic itself, like this example i’ve drawn here.
This icon immediately gets the point across that it’s a game about smacking people with fish.
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100% agreed, makes it catch attention to the player.
In all honesty, I like the drawing more then the icon itself. That’s just me though.
It’s not bad at all! However, I’d follow what @VGVC2 said about the drawing, or maybe look at some examples of icons in the Discover page, references can help a lot in improving your art or GFX overall.