Feedback on my latest gfx

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#1

Feedback on my lastest gfx?

Render100
Render1001920×1080 2.34 MB

Thanks.

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#2

Looks Really good! Lighting is really realistic and it kinda reminds me of the default windows xp wallpaper.

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#3

I really like it, especially the lightning, maybe add some more nature or keep it like that as it reminds me of the Windows XP Background in the background but I also like the grass, well done.

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#4

Nice job. It reminds of the windows XP background too. It may be the over exposure of the grass.

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#5

It looks really good, some things you could do to slightly improve it, is bring the bump map of the rock up a little so you can really see that chisel and depth of the rock. Also, the brightness of the grass feels a little too bright personally it’s a very neon-like greenish-yellow. Finally, the sky is fine just the clouds disappearing behind the grass kinda throws it off for me. But I love your rigging and lighting.

Great work!

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#6

I like it, specially how the character matches with the scenario. This gfx its also perfect for a desktop wallpaper

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#7

Looks alright so far, but here are a few tips you can improve on to make this render stand out.

I guess you’re using either Blender or C4D, however, If it’s possible, invest some cash into Octane Render to allow for realistic light scattering from a model of the sun.

Let me create a little list of tips for improvement, send your updated GFX in your post so we can see your updates on what you’ve done.

  • Rock Texture is alright, however, go onto this website with free textures for enhanced fidelity. (Contact me if you see a surface you want and need it in 4K :slight_smile: )

  • Remove the grass (Too bright and looks like playdough), use a plugin like SpeedTree or Forester to create realistic grass blades and add suitably vegetation (e.g., trees, bushes, plants, etc.)

  • Rim Lighting on the face is too bright, adjust the way the light reflects off the front to allow a thin rim light and then add in post effects in Photoshop/Lightroom.

  • Sky looks too artificial, suggest using an HDRI (High Dynamic Range Imagery) to have an integrated sky into the composition or find a suitable atmosphere from Unsplash.

  • Add bloom onto the face, but not too much.

  • If trees are added, use god/volumetric rays to enhance the light bleeding through the trees.

  • Add some Depth of Field onto the camera, use this chart to help you with camera settings

Hopefully, this will help you.

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